２０１７年５月６日（土曜日）　ena シンガポール校

goodを使いすぎると、not good

Hello everyone,

Today, I want to share with you my experiences in Japan. I went to Japan with my family for a short five-day trip during the Golden Week holiday from May 1 to May 5. I had a good time.

My mother loves flowers as they always look good and smell good. So I decided to bring her to many places around Tokyo to see flowers. On the first day after reaching Japan, we went to the Showa Memorial Park located in Tachikawa, Tokyo.

There was a good display of flowers, ranging from tulips, cosmos, marigolds to nemophilias. The weather was good, and we had a good time.

The next day, I decided to show my mother some wisterias as they do not grow in Singapore. We went to the Kameido shrine located near Asakusa and there was a Wsteria Festival there. There was a good number of food stalls and the atmosphere was good! We tried the fried noodles and it tasted good.

On the last day of our trip, I brought my family to three parks. First, the Tobu Treasure Garden in Tatebayashi city in Gunma prefecture. The nemophilias looked good, much better than the ones we saw in Tachikawa. Also, there was moss phlox or shibazakura in bloom too! I had a good time talking to some Japanese visitors there too.

Then, we boarded the shuttle bus and headed to the Tsutsujigaoka Park, also in Tatebayashi city. There was a good number of azaleas, or tsutsuji, in bloom. The purple, red, pink and white flowers came out well in our pictures.

Lastly, we went to the Ashikaga Flower Park, located in Ashikaga city, Tochigi prefecture. The wisterias there were good! Many were mounted on trellises and looked good at night too! They had a good smell too!

After five days of traveling, all of us were tired but we had a good trip. We are looking forward to visiting Japan again.

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Too many ‘good’ eh?

That’s why when you write your essay, you have to use a range of vocabulary words to prevent repeating common words like ‘good’. These other words can help make your essay more interesting too!

What words would you use to replace ‘good’ in the above essay then?

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By the way, here are some of my pictures of my trip: